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EDIT: I attempted to fix some issues that were address to me about the page and added a new panel to make it a little fuller. Let me know if it works.
Page 22 is up on Monday! Monday! Monday! Oh YEEEEEAAAHHHH!!!
ahem... sorry sugar rush.
I hope everyone had a good mother's day yesterday. Anyway, see you guys on Wednesday
EDIT: I attempted to fix some issues that were address to me about the page and added a new panel to make it a little fuller. Let me know if it works.
Page 22 is up on Monday! Monday! Monday! Oh YEEEEEAAAHHHH!!!
ahem... sorry sugar rush.
I hope everyone had a good mother's day yesterday. Anyway, see you guys on Wednesday
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactIt's an interesting action scene, but I think the speed lines in the background of every panel kinda takes away from the high-speed action 're going for. Especially since there is no road on which the drivers are traveling. I would recommend drawing a road of some sort, so it doesn't feel like they're just floating through space, and also that you change up the speed lines.
The bottom panel on the right my favorite, the foreshortening is nice and it feels the most emotionally loaded to me. I'd recommend, however, that you add a small white line defining the helmet from the arm just a little bit more.
l also really like the middle panel, it shows the course of actions nicely.